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Cole, I'm sorry I'm answering so late, but thank you so much Cole! Reading this made me really happy, and I'm really glad you enjoyed my story. Yes, this is ...

Oh okay, I understand where you were coming from now. The only thing I want to comment on is the father not providing for his daughter. It is true, that ...

Thank you so much for your feedback, that was really helpful! I'll make sure to not make those three mistakes in my future stories. :) -Ellie

Hey, Thank you so much for your helpful response, but I just wanted to let you know that this was a seventh grade project that wasn't supposed to go in ...