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Hey Kaelyn! I loved your story, it was really good. There was only a few mistakes I noticed. First of all, at the beginning of the book, you had said: ...

I really loved it! It was super descriptive - making me feel like I was in the book, which let's you know you did a good job. :) One thing ...

First of all, I really liked it. I liked that it was written in a not to common way with the dairy. There were two things that I noticed that ...

I really liked your story, it was well written and definitely unique. The only thing that I noticed, was it was a little strange how you did the Chinese to ...