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Re: Werewolf Introduction
Well, your introduction is kind of typical. It begins to explain that your main character is abnormal and why. It also explains that he is not a popular kid. That's ...
Jul 6, 2009 -
Re: Twilight Fanfiction: The Wedding
While the priest spoke, thoughts ran through Edward's head. Other people's thoughts. Charlie: That's my baby girl ! Renee: My beautiful daughter, marrying young, just like me. This will hurt ...
Feb 9, 2009 -
Re: Crooked Smile & Sad Eyes
This is beautfiul. I love romance stories. I wonder how things are going to pick up! At first glance, the only thing that I can tell you, is when you ...
Feb 4, 2009 -
Re: Love?
Alright. This is interesting. Maybe it's just me, but it took me a while to figure out that the main character is a guy. Unless I skipped over it, you ...
Feb 3, 2009