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I'm really inlove with this poem. I wish I had some good constructive crticism to give you. But alas, I do not.

You need to capitalize your i's. Sorry, that's my pet peeve talking. But I like it. It's simple and straight forward. Sorry this is so short.

Thanks! I'll try to remember that for next time.

Iliked it. It made me smile. It's simple and cute. The only thing that I didn't like was the repetitive use of starting sentences I don't know it that's and ...

I enjoy the randomness of it, but does it have anything to do with your previous Sunday story, other than sharing the same character? If it does I'm really interested ...