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  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Toothpaste

    I completely get that. I have a lot of pieces that no one can understand because they're set so deeply in the description of my own skin that it's hard ...

    Jul 15, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Toothpaste

    Thank you. I've only been writing poems that rhymed for a short while now, so I'm still getting the hang of it, but thanks so much for your input and ...

    Jul 15, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: chewing

    This was amazing. I loved every line. It flowed really well and made me feel the pain and anticipation of life in every letter. Really well done, thank you for ...

    Jul 15, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: chewing

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    This was amazing. I loved every line. It flowed really well and made me feel the pain and anticipation of life in every letter. Really well done, thank you for ...

    Jul 15, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: chewing

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    This was amazing. I loved every line. It flowed really well and made me feel the pain and anticipation of life in every letter. Really well done, thank you for ...

    Jul 15, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: For What it's Worth

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    I like the vagueness of this poem, how it makes you think about what you're writing for. I think the comparisons you've made give the reader a better understanding of ...

    Jul 15, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Toothpaste

    Thank you so much. The last line is a little vague, but its because its very personal. I'm a little bit of an introvert and others who share this may ...

    Jul 15, 2014


“Sorry about the blood in your mouth. I wish it was mine. I couldn't get the boy to kill me, but I wore his jacket for the longest time.”
— Richard Siken