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Re: Toothpaste
I completely get that. I have a lot of pieces that no one can understand because they're set so deeply in the description of my own skin that it's hard ...
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Re: Toothpaste
Thank you. I've only been writing poems that rhymed for a short while now, so I'm still getting the hang of it, but thanks so much for your input and ...
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Re: chewing
This was amazing. I loved every line. It flowed really well and made me feel the pain and anticipation of life in every letter. Really well done, thank you for ...
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Re: chewing
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This was amazing. I loved every line. It flowed really well and made me feel the pain and anticipation of life in every letter. Really well done, thank you for ... -
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This was amazing. I loved every line. It flowed really well and made me feel the pain and anticipation of life in every letter. Really well done, thank you for ... -
Re: For What it's Worth
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Jul 15, 2014
I like the vagueness of this poem, how it makes you think about what you're writing for. I think the comparisons you've made give the reader a better understanding of ... -
Re: Toothpaste
Thank you so much. The last line is a little vague, but its because its very personal. I'm a little bit of an introvert and others who share this may ...
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