electrictoast27

Very nice poem. It definitely has a lot to say, although having a lot to say doesn't always mean longer...but because it was longer, it afforded you some great 'extra' ...

I like this poem a lot! It is certainly a longing for things to be as they were in the past. Reflecting on the past always makes for good poetry. ...

Well, that was very creative, I must say. Like other people have said, a few minor things, for instance, rating a story like this always helps. But really, you seemed ...

Hey, that was nice! Like the others have said, you are very good at describing things. Imagery was excellent. It was short, though. There better be more! Only one suggestion. ...