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Re: Ivan OrKry
fun poem story I don't really know much about poetry to really say how to approve or can I compare to other poems. As to my thoughts on the story, ...
Jul 13, 2021 -
Re: The Lamppost
needs more lamppost 0/10 just kidding. I like the idea of taking a simple inanimate object and making a story of why it's special even if it's just for two ...
Jul 12, 2021 -
Re: That One Time We Technically Became Pirates Part 2
I was expecting more to happen kind of disappointing should have had at least a small fight scene with the pirates. I feel the calling the captain Mr would have ...
Jul 8, 2021 -
Re: That One Time We Technically Became Pirates Part 1
fun story, I'm also working on a series that has characters in different situations in my case three groups travel to other dimensions one a hero organization one evil organization, ...
Jul 7, 2021
