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Re: a
Hello! I'm Emily and I'll be reviewing your piece today. "and usually pick up Chinese." This phrase seems at odds with the rest of the piece. You're saying this is ...
Feb 27, 2016 -
Re: Thrallmagic: Chapter 20
Hello! I'm Emily and I'll be reviewing your chapter today. Just a disclaimer, I haven't read any of the previous chapter, so I'll be critiquing the writing alone, not the ...
Feb 26, 2016 -
Re: The Eternal Empire (Prologue)
Hello! I'm Emily and I'm going to review your chapter today. First let me say welcome to the young writer's society! Also I love your avatar, I'm a huge Deadpool ...
Feb 24, 2016 -
Re: Dreams of Stars Chapter 12 (Once Upon a Time)
Hello! I'm Emily and I'll be reviewing your chapter today. Just a disclaimer, I haven't read any of your other chapters, so I'll mainly be critiquing the writing, rather than ...
Feb 23, 2016 -
Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter Two [HD Re-release]
Hello! I'm Emily and I'll be reviewing your chapter today. Just a disclaimer, I have not read any other chapters, so I'll just be reviewing the writing, rather than the ...
Feb 22, 2016 -
Re: Winter
Hello! I'm Emily and I'll be reviewing your work today. Overall, a very fun read. It was good to read now, because at this point in February I'm sick of ...
Feb 22, 2016 -
Re: Fabric of Reality
Hello! My name is Emily and I'll be reviewing your work today. My main critique is the lack of paragraphs. For many readers, looking at a big block of text ...
Feb 22, 2016 -
Re: The Leather Bound Book
Hello! Emily here to review your short story. First let me say welcome to The Young Writers Society. I like the premise, and the ending is good. Just curious, does ...
Feb 21, 2016