ehobby

Hello! I loved reading your work, I really hope you write more. Some of your prose is a bit awkward, but easily fixable. Things like "but she was firmly already ...

Hello! First I'd like to say, awesome piece. Very profound and thought-provoking. You have some grammatical errors, but they have been pointed out in other reviews. Your prose is great, ...

Hello! First off I just want to say that this is amazing work for five minutes. My biggest critique would be the opening sentence "I sighed as I was trapped ...