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Thanks so much, I%u2019ll see if I can change anything according to your review.

Thanks so so so much, I%u2019ll revise the poem to see if I can change anything.

Thanks so much, I%u2019m sorry for the language, I felt a specificity of meaning was important in a poem with a meter and line count as I could then spare ...

Thank you, and your criticism is something I am very aware of, I will try to tone it down a bit. Many thanks again for your review.