ectoBiologist

I have to tell you, when I saw how long this was, I wasn't looking forward to reading all of it because I prefer things short and to-the-point. However, every ...

Okay, I have a lot to say about this! But don't worry, none of it is bad. First, I want to tell you that these jokes are so lame that ...

This is really good. I like your character descriptions, and the story as a whole is well thought out. I wouldn't change anything, but if you do, only make it ...