eclipsedbythemoon

This is capturing for sure! In my opinion however, it is a little lengthy with racey lines which means you may lose reader interest soon. I love the idea and ...

Thank you so much! This is really helpful yes I will keep all of this in mind! Please do keep providing me with more valuable reviews :)

Longer yes I shall keep that in mind hahah! Thank you so much!

Thank you so much! You're critique means the world to me, honestly. It really did help and I agree with all that you have to say a hundred percent! Love, ...

I truly appreciate the compliments and the criticism!! I shall work on the structuring for sure. Love, Eman

Thank you so much! I actually copy pasted this little piece of writing and randomly put it under poetry so oopsie. You're opinion means the world to me so I ...