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Re: Angels
hiya. I decided on reviewing this one because it had the least reviews, but seeing how short this is I will probably review another sometime soon. I'll start off with ...
Sep 1, 2015 -
Re: marinescence
As promised. This is the first I saw, so this is the first I think I'll review. So... I like to approach short and vague poems the way that House ...
Aug 30, 2015 -
Re: Deleted 24
Hiya Lumi, it's been a while. After reading through this a few times, I think the poem grew on me bit. However, there are a few things that you may ...
Dec 18, 2011 -
Re: 1983
I've skimmed the reviews, and they all pretty much have to do with significance and elaboration. So for the sake of not repeating what they've said, we're just going to ...
Dec 13, 2011 -
Re: The Train to Work
Here, as I said I would be. This poem interested me the most so let's see what we have here. So, looking at this as a reader, the first thing ...
Dec 12, 2011 -
Re: Waking at dawn
Was posting this at 11:11 intentional? What am I going to do with you? -__- First stanza is lovely. I like the sincerity of your work. Never really sounds forced... ...
Dec 5, 2011 -
Re: death in my veins
Hiya Mikko, long time no see. Alright, what do we have here... hmm. This poem comes of as pretty self explanatory. The speaker is infected by a tragic loss of ...
Dec 2, 2011 -
Re: Blade-Song
Suddenly not so much of a hopeless romantic. Okay. Well, let's see what we can do here. You have the flow down perfectly-- each word rolls into the next and ...
Sep 10, 2011 -
Re: Hunter
I'm just going to get straight to the point with this one. Feeling a bit lazy after this week. I. Elaborate! It's your story, you control it, you can have ...
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: Hunter
You asked for my thoughts, so here I am. Saving a spot for later. P.S. The very first time I read this, I was in the middle of calculating the ...
Aug 16, 2011 -
Re: On Going War
Hiya there. My thoughts aren't as coherent as I'd like them to be right now, so I'm sorry if this turns out to be a waste of a review :P ...
Jun 30, 2011 -
Re: unlit
Hiya Kafka. I hope you'll forgive me, one for being late and two for not giving a complete review. I'm afraid I'll have to cut it a bit short as ...
Jun 7, 2011 -
Re: devoured
It's been a while since I've given a review, so I'm just going to take this stanza by stanza. Sorry ahead of time for anything that doesn't make sense - ...
May 28, 2011 -
Re: What is lost that can be given?
I'm not going to go into much detail, considering other reviewers have already done that for me. I haven't read through any of the reviews, but I'm assuming they're throrough ...
Apr 1, 2011 -
Re: Colin Strider Chapter One
I'm not of much use on things other than poetry or prose, but I'll see if I can give this a shot when I have more time to think it ...
Mar 28, 2011
