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Thanks for pointing out all that stuff! For that first thing where Eli used an exclamation point, I was kinda using it from my own point of view. Like, most ...

I'm confused. If you mean how Elijah went to see Peter at his house and everything, then I can easily explain that. If you haven't read the earlier chapters, then ...

Thanks! You're awesome! Anyway, Elijah is sort of reserved and everything, and his mom just wants him to be outgoing and do other things besides read. My mom's sort of ...

Okidokie! Thanks for reading and such! Off to fix the issues! -Emily :smt003

Okay! Thanks! That one awkward sentence was giving me issues too, so thanks for helping me with that, and I'll go fix the little grammar errors and misspellings. I'll work ...

Okidokie! I'll go back and try to add some more adjectives. They aren't my strong point, but I'm working on it! Thanks for the comment! -Emily

I'll go and fix those things once I post this. Where I put an anger, I think I began to type anger, stopped, spaced, and typed anger again. Yeah. I ...

Once again, Okidokie! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing my story! I'll definitely PM you when chapter five is up, which probably won't be for a while. (I'm having ...

I LOVE EAVESDROPPING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! My parents get tired of me sometimes. :smt040 Okidokie! I'll definitely work on that... heheheh Thanks for the tips! I'll work up on that! -Emily

Okidokie! I'll keep that in mind! Yeah. I noticed the lack of religious stuff on here, so I was a little iffy about posting it up, but I did. It's ...

I love the whole plot, and I can't wait to read and see what happens! I like how the dude is sort of arrogant and not worried about his newfound ...

Thanks! It's helpful, and I'll keep your suggestions in mind while I write the next chapter. -Emily

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Like I have mentioned before, I do need to work on my use of adjectives and description. I don't really understand the concept of writing ...

Thanks! I'll fix those issues once I post this. I have done a whole lot of research on Nanga Parbat. Actually, I did my finals project on it. I am ...

Thanks! I actually modeled Peter after this guy from my classes at school. Most of the guys at school act like that, but I'll work on making him a bit ...