duckinatophat9376

I have Everlight as my brilliant co-author, they should be working on the story right now, there's many good suggestions here, the reason for the fast sentences is to speed ...

you can make the changes now I believe

looking back, I don't really have time to make these changes, I need a co-author to help me out with the storys.

thanks, ill be making the changes, I'm not the best with grammar