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This story was very moving. It really grabbed my heart and made me cry. You're a great writer. There's not a thing that I don't like. The concept of the ...

This elegant, flawless, eccentric, detailed oriented...I can't find any other words to describe this. It is so amazing. It is put together very well. I love the use of words ...

This is quite good honestly. I feel like you need a bit more description, but that's just me. I liked how you described her. It's funny because I have a ...

i agree with both comments before mine. Overall this was great, minus the few errors, the slight description etc. I want to see where you go with this. It seems ...

This is the third story, i think, that I have read on here that it is brilliant. It made me feel like crying, a lot of the romantic short stories ...

This is really, really good. I love the emotion you put into it. I am glad to see that you took all of the corrections into consideration! I only have ...

Was this the entire thing, or is there going to be more? It seems like there could be more but that's just my opinion. It's really good. I love the ...

It has been a long time since I story, not my own, has brought tears to my eyes. There is depth in your story and there is plenty of emotion. ...

This story has a lot of potential. It captures what girls go through so many times a day. It also captures how man just use girls and think it's okay. ...