dreaming_in_poetry

I really like this... I've never read anything you've written before, so I hope this doesn't come across as odd, but it was very beautiful. It does seem kind of ...

I like it so far, the idea that there is a special force team of teenagers out there to settle the world's disputes... Interesting. It gets a little techinical in ...

I was seriously disappointed in the Volturi. I was counting on Aro and Caius to be MUCH more badass. The tension was mounting through out the book, with Bella having ...

I'm glad I kept reading! I truly enjoy your descriptions and imagery. The flashback was a little confusing, as to where it started and where it ended, but other than ...

Very nice descriptions. The way you manipulated the third person point of view provided me with a clear sense of imagery. However, I felt that parts of it were slightly ...