dreambig_andeiita

I really like this poem! I love how the situation isnt perfect but the moment is! :D I really think it could be longer.. perhaps a different ending! :D good ...

hahaha ok that was funny! :D I liked it, it caught my attention and it was awesome! :D I really like the fact that is short and I love how ...

I really like it! :D but I think maybe as a reader it would be easier to keep up with it if there was a little bit more of a ...

beautiful! I like the way you can picture everything that is happening and that maybe letting go its ok. keep going, I really enjoyed it, its easy to read! ♥ ...

its very solid, you never lost the sense of what the poem is about, I think in the last line it should be "my heart has been turn" dont know ...

I like it, its very direct, the only thing that confuses me its what you really feel about the situation you put facts but not your input which makes it ...