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Re: The Daughter of War- Chapter 4: The Daughter of Spring
I got tripped up reading this section- Josephine ran for Dimitra and lifted her left leg to connect with her injured leg. The two hers right after each other but ...
Tue Dec 19, 2023 7:48 pm -
Re: Emotional Short Circuit
Hi-o, always nice to see a good poem. The heart is compared to a computer and a train engine. These two separate metaphors intermixed on top of each other add ...
Fri Dec 15, 2023 7:47 pm -
Re: Free
A great use of tension, in both romantic and dramatic. The word choice makes the characters bond almost tangible like here A soft smile cracks onto Akim’s face as he ...
Fri Dec 15, 2023 7:31 pm -
Re: Dear Death (A Poem)
The use of "Dear Death" makes it almost like a beginning of a formal letter. Well, formal letters because it is repeated. And the use of addressing death as a ...
Tue Dec 12, 2023 8:11 pm
