dragonfphoenix

I hope that fixed the issue; I don't know why it does that. It's really annoying. [Especially since I thought I had the issue fixed]

D'Arvit! I thought I fixed that...*sigh* I copy pasted from my Word doc, and had to go back through and press 'delete' to fix the paragraphs, so I thought the ...

This king seriously reminds me of Ganondorf from Legend of Zelda, except that this king's the good guy. So maybe go with Garrett ("brave spearman") or Giovanni ("God is gracious") ...

Okay. Word of warning. PLEASE make it explicitly clear that there are two PoVs since you're writing in first person. I read another work that didn't, and it left me ...

I am sorry if my terms confused you. Black-is-white means someone who looks evil but turns out to be good. White-is-black, someone who looks good/pure/"white"-in-the-symbolic-sense, but is actually ev

I started my review before you, but you had the gall to post yours before mine and snag the first review points. You little giraffe...*grumbles, mutters, snarls*. ;) With what? ...

That is true; however, (and don't ask me why this is, I only know that it is) the past tense of 'lie' is 'lay', not 'laid'. Don't know who thought ...

Gotta love open-ended assignments. :D

Hahahaha!!! *sigh* That was really good. I wasn't sure what you meant by 'prose poem', but after reading this, I don't care. That was really funny. Your words were really ...

Here. Shoot me an email and I'll try to reply as best I can. I've been having issues with the PM system on YWS, and the answer and unnecessary punctuation ...

Then like your own stuff, silly! I'm not the one who wrote the code, nor am I trying to 'milk the system'. Just roll with the flow, you know? Haha, ...

no, I didn't realize that. However, I don't think that's a bad thing, do you?

Thanks for the review! With the conversation you mentioned, that's actually the point: it's just two guys asking for directions, and just because they look threatening and are a little ...

That's better, but there are a lot of punctuation marks that just seem to be thrown in there randomly. Also a few 'new paragraph' that slipped by you. I almost ...

Nice poems. Loved the Christian acronym!!! Very cool. Just one thing: shouldn't all personal pronouns referring to Christ be capitalized (they should)? So could you fix those? Other than that ...