dragonfphoenix

I see. Well, at times when I'm writing up a review I tend to forget the 'minor details' like that, but my point was that it just didn't stick out ...

no prob. And I'd love to hear any comments you might have for my writing. The Kingdom of Boredom should be in the Literary Spotlight right now, but if not, ...

Thank you all for your support of this story! I'm really surprised to see how popular it's been over here. I had it up on another writing site, and my ...

Very interesting poem. You captured the dream of a young girl for marriage quite well.

At the top right of every article, there's a star with the word "Like" next to it. Just click the word (or the star; I think both work.)

Very pleased to hear this little experiment is so popular. Thanks for reading, and please don't forget to like it! The more likes, the more visible it is to other ...

Thanks for reviewing! And glad you enjoyed, planning on getting the next chapter up soon. Please don't forget to like it! That way others can find out about it too.

Glad you liked it! Thanks for the review.

Yes, I'm definitely going to write more. Actually, I already have the second chapter up. Hope you enjoy!

Hey, no problem. So, since this is such a big hit, do you think I should post more? Yes there are more chapters, a little over a dozen more.

Massive chunks? I only see one section that seems rather large [on this site]. However, it's not that big of a section, so I'm not sure I understand what you're ...

A comment on Amethyst's review. With the "Twisting into my brain like a blunt needle.", that's a fragment, but technically acceptable. Now, removing the period from the previous sentence and ...

It's up to you. I'm just saying I wasn't getting any mental image that reminded me of perfume, pleasant or horrible.

All right, I believe I've gotten everything. I went back and fixed Chpt. 2 as well.

Yes I did; I wasn't going to at first because almost all my advice could have come from the first paragraph, but then I found the Mary Sue issue and ...