dracowave

Hey steampowered thanks for the review, you clarified a lot of things I need to improve/fix. Sorry about not adding speech marks to clarify but to be honest I still ...

Hey Lav thanks for the review it helps out a lot. I know I need to work on identifying who's talking. because perspective in a story is a pretty big ...

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Hi dogsrule i would like to start off by saying that I really like your story. It was very intriguing with lots of humor and so far it has an ...

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Hi dogsrule i would like to start off by saying that I really like your story. It was very intriguing with lots of humor and so far it has an ...

Hey Mloomps thanks for the review i sampled a few elements from some anime's, manga and light novels. I'm also still working on figuring out the whole he said and ...

Thanks for the review and the wishes Pedro this is my first time writing a story so i of course have to work on finding my own style and flair. ...

No problem i really do like your story and thanks for clearing up my misunderstanding i'm not really good at reviewing things so if i didn't help much i apologize. ...