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Those damned commas with the names elude me every time. Much thanks Shafter, though the version I have posted here is still an older one. (redrafted the whole damn book ...

Snoink, the general questions you ask are all relevant, because they are all things that will be revealed later in the story. You'll learn some more about the man, about ...

(GE is undergoing an overhaul, so these two installments are now gone. But the prologue has been overhauled, so check that out if you want.)

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Thanks for the crits. The explanation for why orphan Alec is named after the prologue Alec comes in 2 chapters I believe it was. I elaborated a bit in my ...

Made a few changes. The baby being referred to as an 'it' was intentional... Maggie coming to terms with it's 'personhood', realizing the 'thing' is not just another 'problem' but ...