dolwright

Wow! i always give the lyrics forum a pass, but this piece got me reading to the end, you could actually go platinum with this, good work. If this was ...

Good thinking Rubz! But the lack of paragraphs can be a major turn off to any reader at first. It made the piece seem rushed. But it is an interesting ...

I think you were right when you said it was lame at first, but reading through it actually made sense, i liked the connection you were trying to make with ...

funny story, though I'm thinking the tomato and orange represents some human characters that would rather be represented as tomatoes and oranges, just guessing, anyways, your story is good, but ...

This was a good story from start to finish...the storyline paints a perfect picture of most young girls addiction to looking slim and exceptionally thin, not minding the anorexia and ...

That was impressive i must say, memories can be pleasant but sometimes they are hard to live with. I like the rhyming in the beginning lines, but i observed the ...