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Re: You Say There is No Magic
This is a cool concept. I like how you used Harry Potter Gandalf. I wish his fireworks were real!
Aug 6, 2016 -
Re: Short Scene #1: Mama Says
This is so sad! I was hoping for a sweet ending and it wasn't! I love it! You've built up hope only to have the reader shattered at the end. ...
Aug 6, 2016 -
Re: The Family Jewels
Thanks so much! I hope you enjoy the first chapter too :)
Aug 6, 2016 -
Re: Werewolfing. 4
I like how you said 'demon stare'. I thought that was a great way to describe his stare. I like the name Tanvi and how questions are posed throughout the ...
Aug 5, 2016