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I like how you've set the scene, very vivid. I liked how you described Adriens accent! Very poetic. The shit headed Donald Trump made me laugh! Love it! I hope ...

I love the imaginary friend concept. It's intriguing. My advice would be to watch out for contradictions, Lloyed went to the forest where as Vera runs into the woods. Are ...

Is she trying to kill the mouse? I wasn't sure. I like how you changed the spelling from Alexander to Aleksander, I love names like this. I enjoyed reading this, ...

I am not a professional so I could be wrong about everything! I liked how you describe things, I liked metal blue eyes, although metallic blue eyes would probably sound ...

I like how you've written an abusive relationship, she needs to be home in time, obsessed with her scheduled so she doesn't make Victor mad. A suggestion would be to ...

I am not a professional so maybe don't pay to much attention to my review. I like the way the girl thinks. She strikes me as very headstrong, I hope ...