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When I read my story too I feel like it's a longer version of the back of the book, I guess I need to work on some different writing techniques ...

This is a great story, also considering you're from Mexico. Or, I mean, that your second language is English, and that's cool. I'm mostly fluent in french but I could ...

I liked it a lot, there were a few things I would've changed but other than that I think it's great. You had a good amount of detail, but not ...