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Thanks once again! And it's very useful! Hehe, ability wasn't meant to sound like a special power hehe. I will definitely change the structure of this chapter the next time ...

Hi Tanya! Assume not! You are the first to mention this aspect of the scene, and you have a very good point. When I get to the rewrite, I will ...

I see lol... well, the thing that makes a short story different from a chapter is that it raises questions which are mostly answered by the end of the story, ...

Please don't change the specimen line, I knew exactly what you meant and I thought it was funny! I assume you'll build on that plot line so it will be ...

Thank you so much James! For your compliments and your reviews. You don't strike me as one who hands out flattery for kicks, so I'm touched by your respect for ...

Thanks for your review! I love how writers can go on for paragraphs then apologise for writing a short review! It's just fine hehe. Ok, so the African American girl ...

Hi Thundah! Thanks for your review :-)

Omg, your review has been sooo helpful! I can tell you have mad skills. I'm a total amateur and I was aware of the issues you pointed out but not ...

Thanks!

Awww :'-) I'm touched that I inspired a gasp! Hope I can achieve that in all my creative endeavours! Thanks!

Interesting, I may try ink... I got a tip to eliminate outlines completely from another reviewer, so I'll try both styles on different pieces. Thanks!

Thanks! I have a few more, may share them later :-)

Hehe, don't hold back with questions, you can PM me any time if you prefer. But just taking it further, perhaps she needs to be the descendent of 2 psychic ...

Traunt! :-D I love your questions! Mainly because they make me think of aspects of my story that I may not have gotten round to thinking about yet :-P And ...

Thank you for your review! I appreciate every bit of feedback, and go ahead and take your time! I understand that it can get overwhelming looking at a whole list ...