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I was about to say Introduction or Concept Study, but looks like you were faster than me:)

What I meant about the dialogue being too much exposition wasn't that it was unneeded, I meant that there are better, more accepted ways of giving that information, dialogue being ...

Greetings, fellow author! As this is quite a short chapter (at least by my standards) I will take the liberty of dissecting it in great detail, hopefully providing you with ...

Hello and thank you for your review! Let me address some points: I use British English, since that's the one I learnt:) You might notice some other 's' forms instead ...

Hello there, dear author! Let me preface this by saying that I enjoy the libertine, borderline free-form style of this piece. Were I to catalog it I'd put it in ...