deiseach

Thank you so much for the help, I do see what you mean about the telling rather than showing, this is the second short story I've written in this world ...

Fantastically atmospheric, the language is evocative and the tension is visceral. The mystery of the Flannan Isles lighthouse is one I'm familiar with and this short story does it justice. ...

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Thank you so much for the feedback! The Vaemin inner turmoil is a consistent feedback I get, I need to add another scene or two to get the word count ...