defiantAuthoress

Thank you so much for your input! I appreciate it.

Oh yes! That's a great connection; I just think that even simplified, it would work. Up to you, though! ^^

Ah, thank you so much! I really appreciate this!

Thank you very much! I'll keep that in mind as I revise it.

Sorry, what's a palindrome? (I mean, I know what a palindrome is, but what part of the poem is?)

Oh, that all makes sense! The light/dark team thing was a little bit unclear. Since its only me, I probably wouldn't change it. These were just things I noticed; if ...

Thanks very much! I definitely see your points.

Thanks again! I totally get what you're saying about all of this, especially the "love is an open door" part.

Thank you so much! I'll make those changes.

Thank you so much!

Thank you so much! I really appreciate this review.

I think the changes are great. :D No problem!

Thank you so much! I think you understood the poem pretty well, which makes me happy (and of course everything is up for interpretation). I agree with many of your ...

Great idea! Thank you. ^^

Thank you so much! I totally agree about the third stanza; I wasn't sure how to phrase it correctly.