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Re: Fury in the Wind chp 10 - Potter's Creek (again)
I like this story! I think the dialogue is well written and easy to follow. The paragraphing is also nice. The vocabulary is well chosen to fit the vibe of ...
Aug 1
I like this story! I think the dialogue is well written and easy to follow. The paragraphing is also nice. The vocabulary is well chosen to fit the vibe of ...
Aug 1