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Hi, thanks for reviewing my poem! I originally wrote this because I actually did eat a grapefruit that day and felt like devoting something to its amazing tastee

It is a true story, to answer your indirect question. It's an account of my 13th b-day. I hope you enjoy the gift I sent you for reviewing my work. ...

Thanks. And yeah, more than half of the story takes place in the school. But I'm glad you liked it. I didn't exactly write it to relate to anybody, I ...

Strangly enough, when people are negative, their writing is more interesting. At least yours is. I wouldn't really change anything about it. It's simple but it doesn't need to get ...