deathkougra

Personaly I thought the intorduction was very weak, and needs some work. You could also use alot more detail.

i really liked the poem it a great way to think about death. Alot of people think that death a horrible thing, you saw the bright side

i thought it was a graet poem i did find one mistake, when you wrote "When will you be with me love?" did you forget to pace a comma after ...

that was a awsome poem, i really enjoyed the questioning. I'm not a rieligious person but, the ending was great and really proves faith

hey i really liked the poem. I found no errors.