dead_poet

Well written. I enjoyed reading it and hope there will be more to read. Word of advice. Space out the paragraphs so that it will be easy for others to ...

Aw how sweet. Very well written. I don't see how anyone got lesbian action in there either. Don't put any in there. Anyway, I enjoyed reading it and hope there ...

I like it! That was a very clever way of putting the bands together.

I enjoyed it. Personally, I thought your descriptions and mood of the story went along perfectly. I hope there is more and I hope to read it.

I think the story is pretty neat. I loved how you described each character. It did seem as though you were rushing through the chapter as if you had to ...