daydreamer9

Here is the compilation of my reviews for each poem: - - - - - - - -- - - - - - - - - - - - Would ...

thanks for all your reviews! I am finally going through and making all the corrections that were suggested. Muchos gracias!

Burning through like the paper, Wrote on with your unfulfilled words.

Thank you all so much! Your reviews have been so helpful. :] --- daydreamer9

Of course! Where you say: "I woke up to the sound of footsteps. I raised my head, and saw three humans walk in. They smelled..sad." You could possibly do something ...

Especially for a first attempt, I think you are off to a good start. My only advice is to not to rely as heavily on dialogue and let your narrator ...