davidg

It's a very nice theme but the 9 out of 11 lines all rhyming doesn't agree with me. I agree with this. Also, the word 'you' is repeated a whole ...

Sorry, but I don't like it. It seems very generic and risk-free. Maybe you could try writing a longer version, then cutting it down till you are happy with it?

I agree that 50 Cent should not be name dropped in this. Most people consider him as a joke, and his flow is pretty pathetic. You could use Mad Skillz, ...