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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Unique

    Everyone seems to have a strong desire tobe unique and nowadays, people are seen to display the most eccentric possible things just to ensure their uniqueness. I guess I always ...

    Oct 17, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I miss the Rain

    Smashing poem. Keep it up. I lived it so much, i became a huge fan of this. I miss the rain, is great, well written and inspired obviously, otherwise it ...

    Oct 16, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Angel Bound- the Chronicals of Angel Light

    WOW! Totally a wonderful example of talent and skill combined into a proliferation of words that cohesively paint a portrait of the story and the writer. WELL DONE. The next ...

    Oct 15, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Untitled

    So I woke up today And had the worst feeling My nails are filthy My eyes are splitting . bad transition Since tonight will be the night And the heart ...

    Oct 15, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: To Alex

    I guess this is a one verse poem, so there is not much to talk about here. Although somewhat catchy, a suggested revision would include more lines, less contractions and ...

    Oct 15, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: In the House with Chicken Feet (7)

    When Hin first woke up, he was sure he was dreaming. It would make sense after all. He was curled tightly into a ball, warm and secure. It had all ...

    Oct 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: To Mom

    I love the powerful and vivid emotions used in your poem. I love poetry and am published in several books locally. I am trying to get the support of members ...

    Oct 14, 2011


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