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Re: Unique
Everyone seems to have a strong desire tobe unique and nowadays, people are seen to display the most eccentric possible things just to ensure their uniqueness. I guess I always ...
Oct 17, 2011 -
Re: I miss the Rain
Smashing poem. Keep it up. I lived it so much, i became a huge fan of this. I miss the rain, is great, well written and inspired obviously, otherwise it ...
Oct 16, 2011 -
Re: Angel Bound- the Chronicals of Angel Light
WOW! Totally a wonderful example of talent and skill combined into a proliferation of words that cohesively paint a portrait of the story and the writer. WELL DONE. The next ...
Oct 15, 2011 -
Re: Untitled
So I woke up today And had the worst feeling My nails are filthy My eyes are splitting . bad transition Since tonight will be the night And the heart ...
Oct 15, 2011 -
Re: To Alex
I guess this is a one verse poem, so there is not much to talk about here. Although somewhat catchy, a suggested revision would include more lines, less contractions and ...
Oct 15, 2011 -
Re: In the House with Chicken Feet (7)
When Hin first woke up, he was sure he was dreaming. It would make sense after all. He was curled tightly into a ball, warm and secure. It had all ...
Oct 14, 2011 -
Re: To Mom
I love the powerful and vivid emotions used in your poem. I love poetry and am published in several books locally. I am trying to get the support of members ...
Oct 14, 2011
