darkmindedemo

Thank you. The capitalization was to have a secret message, it was done intentionally. I'm glad you liked it. I think this one is one of my best I have ...

Thanks, I just did some editing on one of my poems and updated it. Would you check it out? It is called Don't.

Ok I will.

It's fine. I did not edit much on this piece, but I am working on it now.

Ok. Now it makes more sense.

Thank you. I will work on that. Hopefully you will read again once it is edited.

Thank you. Hopefully you read again when I am done editing it.

Thanks for the review. I will work on this. And the only times there were periods is when there was one needed for the "hidden" message. I will read the ...

In my opinion you succeeded. Good job. I probably would not be able to do very well at it.

Thank you. I know I'm probably not a very good writer compared to some others on here. I work to get better though, because I really love writing. I will ...

Thank you for the review. I will work on that.

That review as a poem was cute and it made me laugh a little. I will keep writing, it's one of my favorite things to do.

Thank you. I will work on this and make it more detailed with my life.

Thanks for the review. I will probably just take out the line "colors of love" because I do not want to sway from the topic I'm trying to write about. ...

If you have nothing else to say, then leave it as it is. It seemed like you could go more in depth (plus I generally prefer longer poetry.. sorry about ...