darkdove

i like it, some people might take the poem the wrong, thinking it was sexual or something. Anyway I like it --especially because it reminds me of water , water ...

What you had was good but I don't think its a poem and no where near an ode. An ode usually has three parts and some sort of rhythm. you ...

I liked was amaxing ..like a romantic slasher film. It sounds like to me that the narrator is in love with the person's blood or body rather then the person. ...

I like it, but it does feel like your dumping information in my lap. You're very good at writing and I do want to read more of you stuff. Just ...

i think the story was well thought out and look forward to reading more of it. however there are some problems i have with it mainly detail. but as far ...