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Hey, I can't wait to read and review this! Praise: Your vocabulary was exceptional. Also you used great figurative language, Overall this was a good story. It was fun to ...

Hello! First of all, I like the style you wrote this in. This was an amazing prologue and I'm exited to read the next part of the story. This also ...

Hello! This is my first time reviewing a poem so sorry if this is bad. First some corrections, I think that you should have a more defined rhyme scheme. Though ...

First of all hello! Praise: The story has a modern feel to it. Also Your character's personality is clearly shown in the first paragraph. I like your use of figurative ...

I love your use of imagery throughout the story I can clearly see what you are trying to depict. In the first paragraph on the third line you spelled the ...

It was fun to read it had a very soft feel to it. It was extremely relate able. In the first sentence when you say "such a cold weather outside.." ...

Hello! I love the imagery you used i can see all the citrus trees. When you said "I produced my phone from my pocket and dialed the emergency number" it ...