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  • Short Story » Humor, Other Re: Lucky Pair

    This is a really nice piece. It's short, but detailed which is a really good feature. And one of the best things about this story is that it can never ...

    Oct 7, 2013
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: James.

    Very moving, very real. This is a really great piece. I appreciate how you characterized the characters, and how you inquired a sense of dread especially towards the end. It ...

    Oct 7, 2013
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Other Re: Memories of Snow

    I appreciate this work. Your word choice is undeniably well thought out. I liked how you used certain adjectives or verbs (frosted sugared, kissed the frozen ground, slumbering trees etc.) ...

    Sep 8, 2013


Every time I’ve gotten feedback that was hard to take it was usually hard to take because there was truth in it and I didn’t like that (or didn’t want to receive it). That’s not to say all harsh feedback is good or that we should be harsh for harshness’ sake, but learning to absorb truth without letting it break your inner core/break you is a lifelong skill that keeps your mind elastic and open to learning.
— soundofmind