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Re: I died for you
I loved you, I cared for you, I died for you. You weren’t sure, you were confused, you hated yourself for missing the chance. It all started one day at ...
Nov 14, 2010 -
Re: Crackling Fire
Crackling Fire Imagine rolling hills going on for miles and mile without an interruption of a tarmac road or a sound of an engine. All you can hear is the ...
Nov 10, 2010 -
Re: A Box Full Of Dreams
This was so incredibly sad, I can't stand it! I almost didn't want to finish but I pushed on and I'm glad I did, this was very good! The whole ...
Nov 10, 2010 -
Re: Craved [1]
Hey everyone, so this is some work I started about a year ago, and I wasn't going to finish it, I was actaully going to delete it, but I wanted ...
Nov 9, 2010 -
Re: Zombies are among us
Wow this was pretty good! A little gory for my taste but nevertheless a fairly good story!The zombies or whatever they were, were convincingly scary which is essential in a ...
Nov 8, 2010 -
Re: For the Better Chapter One
I'm planning on writing an informational introduction to this later. Yes, I have no title for this yet, probably because I only wrote this just now. Any suggestrions would be ...
Nov 7, 2010 -
Re: Brokenhearted Beloved
How do you fall out of love? You meet that one person, and they change your life forever. Then w hat? After all you go through, _ after all they ...
Nov 7, 2010 -
Re: The Job of the Living
When I was little I held firm belief in three things. Everything was subject to change, except these three things: One: Cheerios were the greatest snack ever invented Two: Nothing ...
Nov 7, 2010 -
Re: Write What You Know
This piece is impressive! Your main character started off seeming so inncocent and fragile and then you built it to such a crescendo and then she turns into someone who ...
Nov 7, 2010 -
Re: The Heir
Very well done, the opening paragraghs were very gripping and I was interested immdiately. The dialogue was also written well, it flowed and never really seemed awkward. I also could ...
Nov 7, 2010 -
Re: My Robin Hood Chapt. 1
Lol, I kept wondering why you never described how Robin Hood looked, well daydreamer that would be because she is BLIND! Well I now officially feel like an idiot. :D ...
Nov 7, 2010 -
Re: The Voyage of Kato [1]
Hey there! This was interesting but it had some problems. First of all, it's under Historical Novels but I really don't have any idea when or where this story is ...
Nov 7, 2010 -
Re: The Traveler (Updated! 12/30/2010)
That was so adorable and sweet, I wish your Cecil really existed! And then we could clone him, one for you one for me lol. There were a few little ...
Nov 7, 2010 -
Re: The road not taken. *Edited*
This story was taken from the idea of a poem called, The road not taken by Robert frost. It was just an idea so I hope you think it made ...
Nov 6, 2010 -
Re: Hurting.
Here Iam! First I'll just say I like your style of writing, it pulls me in and before I know it, I'm at the end wishing there was more lol. ...
Nov 6, 2010
