cuteape

thanks a lot. I'm new to the whole writing thing, so your tips and corrections really help me. I'll keep all of them in mind. :D

I think I'm going to be rewriting this novel. I don't like the way it's going so far

Is it still too rushed?

Still unsure of where she was going, Rose continued on. She could hear Will's breath and footsteps behind her, which comforted her. She was still so angry and frustrated with ...

Ok, I think I added a bit more, for the liking of others. Please see if you like it. Thanks Oh! If you have already read the first half, just ...

I appreciate all of your constructive criticism. My story, like I said, is not finished yet. I will take the advice about spelling and about telling about the village. I'm ...

I think I found a fitting title, In a World Unknown. The story is not complete, actually, not even close. I wrote that little section off the top of my ...