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  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Blazen Chapter #2 (revised)

    I thought this was really good but you should have developed the character of Callie more. Also remember to use correct punctuation in speech, e.g. “CALLIE WAKE UP!” should be ...

    Oct 2, 2011


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