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Thanks again for your feedback! Thanks for bumping the rating up to 18 . I usually italicize thoughts, but I guess I forgot to do it here. I'll fix that ...

Thank you so much for your feedback! The reason I had Sarah get so spooked when Logan surprised her was because that's generally how I react when I'm super worried ...

Thanks again for the feedback! To clarify on Jay, they are actually nonbinary, which is why I rarely use gendered pronouns for them. Jay is Sarah's twin. However, because of ...

Thank you so much for the feedback! The "Gay %u2122" was definitely not on purpose. I'm writing the story on a google doc and my friends like messing with me ...