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Re: Branded and Scarred (Prologue: Revised)
Oooh, I really like this. The first sentence was absolutely terrifying, at least to me. I liked how you described the Voltages briefly, but well enough that we know that ...
Mar 21, 2012 -
Re: And Pulled the Trigger
I would be one of those "nerds" too. But I would huddle in a group and cry. Because I'm a coward like that.
Feb 28, 2012 -
Re: The Siren's Story- Chapter 4
Thanks! I'll be the first to admit that I suck at editing! Anything that the spell check doesn't put a little line under, I usually don't notice! I guess that ...
Feb 25, 2012 -
Re: Dear Mr. President
This is good. It has an origional idea, which I like. I like how you use language that a kid that age would use. It makes it sound more realistic. ...
Oct 17, 2011 -
Re: Prologue
Thank you so much for this review. The actual book is not set in the 1300's but in the now time, as I choose to call it. Keep reading, I ...
Oct 17, 2011