crescentgaia

So - I liked this. I like the fact that it's fun and quirky and that we don't really know the fate of the quarterback in the bottle. I also ...

I dunno - I really liked the movie. I waited until it was on DVD and didn't see it in the theaters. The White Queen fit with being insane, as ...

Hey AutumnSun. Your poem is very nice. It has good imagery but it feels too much like a blob of text. You need punctuation and breaks in the stanza. I'm ...

The wish to live without fear, is a wish that seems so mear. I love this little part. It is my favorite part of the entire poem. You've taken, in ...

I agree with the comments about the stanzas needing to flow better. It does feel like a bit of a jerky movement or like gasping for breath. yes, i've finally ...