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Re: Annetta and Jacob-Clowns,Magic,Murder and Lies
You know,I actually do the same stuff you%u2019re doing.I compare my work with others and I think that I%u2019m not good at making stories.We are all different when it comes ...
Mar 27, 2022 -
Re: The town of Richardson-part two
Also,who were your favorite characters? (if you had any lol)
Mar 27, 2022 -
Re: The town of Richardson-part two
Thanks for reviewing! What should I rate this story?
Mar 27, 2022 -
Re: Nightingale And Foxglove
Thanks.
Mar 26, 2022 -
Re: See more than what your eyes let you
I don’t think it needs a different title,I like the one it has for the poem,I really liked it because it talks about how leaders will always get the praise,but ...
Mar 21, 2022 -
Re: Night Driving
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Mar 19, 2022
The night does have a hypnotic feel to it and you captured that well in the poem.I feel like if this had visuals,I would imagine it to be a fever ... -
Re: Night Driving
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Mar 19, 2022
The night does have a hypnotic feel to it and you captured that well in the poem.I feel like if this had visuals,I would imagine it to be a fever ... -
Re: Brain-made laughter
I believe this poem is about when laughter can be appropriate and how one simple action can mean so much,how one is judged for what comes out of them.How even ...
Mar 19, 2022 -
Re: Violet-Clowns,Magic,Murder and lies
Also,when I first wrote this story,I intended for Violet to be inhuman. But maybe I%u2019ll rethink it.I don%u2019t know.
Mar 19, 2022 -
Re: Violet-Clowns,Magic,Murder and lies
You made some good points.I have not at that the moment came up with a reason for why she murdered Conrad,but I will. As for editing,I%u2019ll do that.
Mar 19, 2022 -
Re: Lily-Clowns,Magic,Murder and Lies
So%u2026she%u2019s three,but turning four.It%u2019s the same day.
Mar 18, 2022 -
Re: Sleepless Nights
I agree.I ask questions at night.This happens because people have more time to think during the night,there are no that’s what they do.Think.I thought this poem was nice and it ...
Mar 18, 2022 -
Re: Conrad-Clowns,Magic,Murder and Lies
Thank you so much for reviewing!
Mar 17, 2022 -
Re: A
You%u2019re welcome. Also,thanks for telling me what it%u2019s about! Adorable poem!
Mar 16, 2022 -
Re: Can't the wind sigh louder?
Okay,thanks.
Mar 15, 2022
