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  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: Annetta and Jacob-Clowns,Magic,Murder and Lies

    You know,I actually do the same stuff you%u2019re doing.I compare my work with others and I think that I%u2019m not good at making stories.We are all different when it comes ...

    Mar 27, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: The town of Richardson-part two

    Also,who were your favorite characters? (if you had any lol)

    Mar 27, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: The town of Richardson-part two

    Thanks for reviewing! What should I rate this story?

    Mar 27, 2022
  • Poetry » Literature, Lyrical Re: Nightingale And Foxglove

    Thanks.

    Mar 26, 2022
  • Poetry » General, General Re: See more than what your eyes let you

    I don’t think it needs a different title,I like the one it has for the poem,I really liked it because it talks about how leaders will always get the praise,but ...

    Mar 21, 2022
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Night Driving

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    The night does have a hypnotic feel to it and you captured that well in the poem.I feel like if this had visuals,I would imagine it to be a fever ...

    Mar 19, 2022
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Night Driving

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    The night does have a hypnotic feel to it and you captured that well in the poem.I feel like if this had visuals,I would imagine it to be a fever ...

    Mar 19, 2022
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Brain-made laughter

    I believe this poem is about when laughter can be appropriate and how one simple action can mean so much,how one is judged for what comes out of them.How even ...

    Mar 19, 2022
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: Violet-Clowns,Magic,Murder and lies

    Also,when I first wrote this story,I intended for Violet to be inhuman. But maybe I%u2019ll rethink it.I don%u2019t know.

    Mar 19, 2022
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: Violet-Clowns,Magic,Murder and lies

    You made some good points.I have not at that the moment came up with a reason for why she murdered Conrad,but I will. As for editing,I%u2019ll do that.

    Mar 19, 2022
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: Lily-Clowns,Magic,Murder and Lies

    So%u2026she%u2019s three,but turning four.It%u2019s the same day.

    Mar 18, 2022
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Narrative Re: Sleepless Nights

    I agree.I ask questions at night.This happens because people have more time to think during the night,there are no that’s what they do.Think.I thought this poem was nice and it ...

    Mar 18, 2022
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: Conrad-Clowns,Magic,Murder and Lies

    Thank you so much for reviewing!

    Mar 17, 2022
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: A

    You%u2019re welcome. Also,thanks for telling me what it%u2019s about! Adorable poem!

    Mar 16, 2022
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Can't the wind sigh louder?

    Okay,thanks.

    Mar 15, 2022


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