creeperfeverdreams

I edited chapter nine of this story.You can read it if you want. Thanks for your review.I%u2019m glad you think it%u2019s interesting. :)

Thank you! I%u2019ll edit this.

*tune

Thanks! I only have lyrics in mind.But I would want the tune to sound creepy (of course) some tinkling music and maybe a piano.I%u2019m not really sure what the time ...

When summer gets closer the sky grows into a pale pink and the joy of the season creeps much to do and so much to see.A whole lot to explore.Summer ...

I wrote this story because I got a lot of comments on the original story saying their could be more detail.This is an improvement on the original. And thanks!

Oh you mean a tune? No,I don%u2019t have any tune with this. :(

Sure! I could sing this. But where would I link it?

Thank you for the review. I edited it a bit.

Thanks so much! As for the moving situation,Loraine wasn%u2019t hallucinating those clowns. They were real people dressed like clowns hanging around their neighborhood and trying to scare people. Her

You%u2019re welcome. I do like a good Creepypasta. :)

She knows it will work because Leona and Amelia were two girls who have why not Cassie and Avita? I%u2019m definitely going to work on explaining more. Thank you so ...

Huh. Well you%u2019re welcome!

I didn%u2019t think anything could be improved upon. My favorite line was %u201CMy heartbeat does not dictate what you do.%u201D It feels so wholesome.

I%u2019m actually using a character making app called %u201CGacha Club%u201D which also provides backgrounds. I can draw but not like that.